原帖由 好太阳 于 2008-6-1 18:51 发表
What I said is just kidding,each writting tool have it's own value.
严重的语法错误
1 each在此修饰单数名词writting tool 其后跟谓语动词应该是has 而不是have 若是each of the writting tools则可以用have
2 What I said is just kidding 这句话是什么意思呢?“我刚才说的话在开玩笑” 主语是what i said 即我说的话 话怎么能开玩笑呢?显然是犯了主谓不一致的chinglish错误 应该是I was just kidding
原帖由 payin1212 于 2008-5-24 09:47 发表
why?ball pen can write charactors ,even you are by air~~
依然是严重的语法错误
1 和楼上的一样主谓不一致 ball pen 自己是不能做“写”这个动作的 只能说“ball pen can be used to write charactors(或writting charactors)” 也可以补全主语I “I can use ball pen to write charactors(或writting charactors) ” 其实这里用charactors不如chinese charactors(汉字)来得好
2 even you are on air 不是 by air 。 by air 表示乘飞机(去XX地方) on air 才表示状态